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Teen Poetry #3

wishing you were here

Andrea4writes
Junior Member

since 2000-12-03

Posts 31
Fayetteville, NC USA

0 posted 2000-12-07 09:11 PM

Wishing You Were Here

As I lay alone at night,
I dream of the day that you will be here,
to hold me in your arms,
when I am afraid and lonely.
Every night I pray that someday
you will come to me,
and love me the way that I love you.
My hopes, my dreams, my fantasies,
wishing that you were here.

HEy HEY i just wrote this off the top of my head give me somethoughts?? about it~!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2000-12-08 12:07 PM

Well i hope that this guy comes to you soon!! I liked this one

Short and sweet is always nice!! Great job

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-12-08 05:00 PM

I really like the way that you wrote this one, it seems so, I dunno, dreamy. Nice job

"and love me the way that I love you"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-12-08 08:09 PM

I think that it's good with just coming with it off the top of your head.
Anyway good message and content, hope you prevail with your desire.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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