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Dead Dog Blues |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: this sucks Dead Dog Blues: One day when I was two A lovely dog was seen Prancing through the yard Not looking very keen. And so he was eaten up By Charlie that damn mut. I would have walked away, And simply nothing but. Instead I took myself, And remember I was two, Kicked him in the balls Until his face turned blue. The day was saved by me, Yet still that dog was dead. I pouted, then I frowned, And forever lowered my head.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ok, I'm so glad you said it first, I hate telling people their work isn't quite up to their ability. I do think you created the picture of this well though. Who knows, someone could come by and love it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
LOL. This may not be your best work but it cracks me up. Why... Idon't know... I guess I can picture you doing this at two. Anyhow I don't know where you come up this stuff, but it was worth reading. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Haha sorry guys, but I can't post all my best work!! That'd be a sin against my crappy work! I gotta give those an equal chance. 2 replies to this piece of crap? Hell that's better than i thought i'd get!! haha.....Anyway....this poem is a true story, cept for me kicking the dog in the nuts, about my fear of dogs. I saw another dog eat my fav. dog.......so yea. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ewwwwwwwww!!!!! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Do dogs really do that? Hmm. I learnt something new. apsara |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i didn't know it happened either, but I was 5....so i didn't know much of anything back then. ANyway........this just goes to show you..........don't mess with Dominican Doberman pinchers! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
What a different piece of work by our dear Dopey. How did you remember this from so long ago??? People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HOw did I remember? Well i was 5 at the time. I only put the number 2 there cuz i like that better hehe.......but anyway......remembering things at 5 isn't that hard. Anyway this was very impacting on me.....left a scar. So yea......i remember! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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