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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2000-12-07 01:51 PM


He's a mirror image of my soul
He knows of all that makes me whole
But he no longer knows
For all I see now are smoke and mirrors
As if it's all part of a magic show
I stand infront of the bathroom mirror
After numerous showers during the long strenous weeks
Just staring, straining my eyes
To rid the disquise I now find shrouding my eyes
But all I see is him holding her near
I try to focuseach time
But my vision begins to blur with unshed tears
My heart throbs each and every time
I no longer understand
I feel no jealousy but perhaps guilt
Of everything once felt
And pain from the realization
Of long misunderstood dedication
If only I could reach him
Like I did so many times before
But I'm afraid that my heart barred and closed that door
I wish I could apologize for a thousand lifetimes
That's if his heart has not grown deaf from my words
God if only he knew
That without him I truly wouldn't know what to do
And that I'm thankful that it is his eyes of blue
And not no one else's
That reflects my hopes,my fears and my wishes...


"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-12-07 04:23 PM


hey,
this was really great, I like how it's written!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-12-07 06:35 PM


It's good you have this mirror image person to confide in. I assume this is also the man who fits your recipe for destiny. Anyway great job on this one.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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3 posted 2000-12-08 06:13 PM


i have read most of your poems, and they have all touched me deep. I do hope that you finally find happiness in life.  thanks for the share

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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