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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2000-12-05 02:42 PM


Sorry If I misspelled anything...So here goes:

A dash of hope
A sprig of desire
And cinnamon to add to the fire
That would constantly burn within his soul for me
Lots of love and effort
I shall put into this recipe
My recipe for my destiny
Let him have long black hair
And eyes clear as crystals
So I'll just add more cups of delicious morsals
Add more creme and more sugar
So he can have skin that I'll always long to savour
Let him be witty and devishly clever
And let him leave me never
Let him have arms to hold me tightly
And lips soft as velvet
So each and every night
My appetite will be fullfilled
So that I'll never need the use for this recipe again...

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
keoni
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1 posted 2000-12-05 05:19 PM


This is nice. You must really care for this guy. Good luck on getting together.
                                          Jon

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2 posted 2000-12-06 03:05 PM


I like the concept that destiny has this certain recipe......obviously everybody else has their own detailed, and individual recipe......great job on this one. Very creative!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-12-06 05:44 PM


Nice job on this one, I think it's great

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4 posted 2000-12-23 12:15 PM


this is really good.  you have such an imagination.  can you do me a favor and brew my recipe for a girl  

"all i want is for her to be true"
no more lies, i'm sick of em



I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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5 posted 2000-12-23 10:16 AM


I have to add this to my recipe book! This is a really creative piece. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for posting!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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