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Shine (A tribute) Part1
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Shine (A tribute) Part1 |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I can hear the words they do not say, they don't want us to wonder why. But you were taken away from us, and you were to young to die. We won't forget you, don't worry, you'll always be in our hearts. They can put a million miles between us, but we'll never be apart. When a tear falls from your eyes, don't worry, one falls from our eyes for you. Cause all the pain you feel, we can feel too. You'll never see another Christmas, you won't make Confirmation. although you won't be here with us, you'll still be at graduation. A tear falls from heaven, each raindrop falling by. We just want to be with you, so we can tell you not to cry. We just want you to remember, you know we'll remember you. So can you put our picture on your wall, we'll put you on our wall too. Shine down on us, just like you always did. Shine down on us, your smile never hid. Shine down on us, just keep us with you. Shine doen on us, that's all you need to do. --------------------------------------------------- A tribute to Jesica. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Beautiful tribute to your friend Allysa. I know that she is watching down on you. Im off to read part 2. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanx Erin.  How's life?I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautiful! This was such a beautiful poem for your friend. I hope to read more and im off to read #2!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this is written very well, it's excellent. I think the poems you've written about and for Jessica have all been really good. Keep up the great writing "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks guys, you always make me feel good!!! Even when I'm down!!! ANyways, see yas! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Both parts are beautiful. I just read Part II first so that they could be in the order they were posted. I am sure that Jesica has read these poems and is watching over you. Wonderful tributes. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks Elizabeth! I've invited my friend here ya alls! Hallie_Angel aka:Catherine and I go to school 2gether! Welcome her like you welcomed me! Peace, Love, and bulletproof marshamellows! Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I can honestly say that this is probably the best tribute I've read so far. "Shine down on us, just like you always did. Shine down on us, your smile never hid. Shine down on us, just keep us with you. Shine down on us, that's all you need to do." Geez...you just made me teary eyed  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I think I'm gonna cry now. Awesome trubute. Part 2, here I come (anyone got any kleenex...?) ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Just putting these ones in my library.  |
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