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anonymousfemale
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0 posted 2000-12-05 03:05 AM


A heart
Its such a strange thing.
Nibbling at my soul,
Spelling out incomplete words.
Its meanings are so confused,
What do I do? What do I think?
When one part says something,
And the other a total opposite?

Love
Tugs on the heart,
Tangles its strings,
Feeling obscure emotions.
The signals it radiates,
An amber glowing aura,
Does nothing but confuse me,
How do I deal with it?

Torn
Between Sanity and Romance.
What can I do,
To bring a balance back into my life?
Is there such a balance?
Or am I living in a land
Of mystery and scribbled thoughts,
Forever confusing each dream?

~AF~



[This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 12-05-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-12-05 10:08 PM


Love can really do some weird things to you...but overall i think its great no matter what. Great poem  
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2 posted 2000-12-06 03:43 PM


Wait a second, I just read this poem. Well if you didn't know this poem has two titles. "Torn between the two" and "imaginary balance" or something like that. Anyway just to tell you the poem was good the first time hehe.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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anonymousfemale
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3 posted 2000-12-08 12:45 PM


DopeyDope: The two poems are sort of the same..I actually wanted to delete this one and I couldn't so I just wrote the "Imaginary Balance" and hoped for the best.

At least you noticed though..thanks.  

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


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