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Andrea4writes
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since 2000-12-03
Posts 31
Fayetteville, NC USA

0 posted 2000-12-03 10:50 PM


The feeling is unbearable
with out you near
so ill just close your eyes
and pretend that you are here

you're so close
yet so far away
i need you know
what can i say?

THe pleasures of love
bring on the lonliness bouts
though the tortures stay
my heart remains without a doubt

as time ticks away
the shorter it seems
that ill hold you here
sadness overcomes me

ill forever save
this love so true
no matter the future
my heart goes with you

if another shall be found
ill stay my distance away
but my heart and soul
filled with you will stay

forever my love
forever so true
my heart filled promises
i will be waiting for you


© Copyright 2000 Andrea Strout - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2000-12-03 10:54 PM


Welcome to Passions!
This was a wonderful first post. I surely do hope that this person does come back and so on. Good luck and keep on posting. Looking forward to see more!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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IsGona
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since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

2 posted 2000-12-03 10:56 PM


Welcome
Hope your stay is long and enjoyable.
Great first poem
Keep 'em coming
IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-12-04 03:35 PM


  Welcome to Passions  
I hope you enjoy it here!  You poem is really good, you should post some more for us to see.  And be sure to reply to some poems too    < !signature-->

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Child of the Stars
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since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI
4 posted 2000-12-04 07:48 PM


  
  Hi there! Welcome to this wonderful world. This was a really great poem. I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you enjoy everyone elses stuff too!  

   ~Carly

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Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
5 posted 2000-12-04 09:56 PM


Great poem. Im so glad to see so much talent flowing through here! Anyways I hope to see more from you!

Deano


"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


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Twilight Zone
6 posted 2000-12-05 09:16 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

What a wonderful first post.  it's nice to see new members coming in.  I hope you enjoy your stay at the same I actually hope you do stay    A lot of feelings are being poured out in your poem which makes is so good.  Thanks for the read.  And keep sharing  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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7 posted 2000-12-06 08:33 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

This was an incredible first post!!!! It was also so sweet   I cant wait to see more!!!! Welcome again!!

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2000-12-07 07:15 AM


Welcome to Passions Andrea!

We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship!

This is a wonderful first post ... so full of emotion, and nicely expressed. I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message)

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tamma
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since 2000-01-17
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
9 posted 2000-12-07 06:13 PM


Just had to say "WELCOME TO PASSIONS" I'm sure You'll love it here, just like I do.

"I'm an Angel! Honest! The horns are just up there to keep the halo straight!!"


~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~



“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

keoni
Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
10 posted 2000-12-07 06:53 PM


Very nice first post. I hope to see more soon. Welcome to Passions!
                                          Jon

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