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when we were kids everything was so simple
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when we were kids everything was so simple |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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every thing was so simple, there were no drugs, there was no alchol there was nothing but innocence when did life become so complicated when did your life start to fall away from u? Why didnt you tell, why did you wait until it was too late we were everything to each other you told me everything, or at least I thought that your first kiss, your first girlfriend no matter what it was you knew i would always be there And now your gone why did you leave me behind your family never cared, but I did!! i was your friend, you helped, stayed by my side when I was in the hospital, and now thats where you died, I want you to come back, I want to feel your big bear hugs and your impaitent lessons on skateboarding and raving Forever didnt last too long because you were only 16 and I am only 13.. everything seemed so simple when we were kids. RIP James "stone" A. March 25 1984-December 3 2000 you will always be in my heart...I love you Stone... |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
This was beautiful. So much emotion and feeling were captured in it. sometimes i wonder the same thing. Great job. "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a great poem of sadness. This really did express the harshness of the world these days. Kids are medling with things that are just over their heads. I surely hope the best of luck for you and keep posting love!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is a teribly sad poem. This is a harsh world we live in. Thank you for sharing such a great poem Best Regards IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent job of telling this, your words seem so true. I hope you are going to be ok, it can be very hard losing someone close to you. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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