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Teen Poetry #3

Circle in the Night

layla
Member

since 2000-11-19

Posts 74

0 posted 2000-12-03 08:46 PM

I am the moon
nonexisting without light
u r the sun with unreachable height
and u shine on me-u shine through me and with me
you are my support
you r the very means of my existence
you r always right
and without u
i am just a circle in the night

For my mother, I love you

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-12-03 09:09 PM

This was a very wonderful poem, its great that you can appreciate your mother and her leadership. Keep up the great work!!

~Carly

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-12-04 03:27 PM

Hey,
This is really good, I like it

keep posting

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-12-06 03:21 PM

I really thought this was great! This was beauty at its best!!
A wonderful tribute for your mother!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2000-12-06 08:44 PM

This was a very beautiful tribute to your mother

Very sweet

I am the moon
nonexisting without light
u r the sun with unreachable height

That was very powerful!! I loved it! Great job

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