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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-03 09:46 AM


I guess its my stupididty, I told him that his "friends" should be more important than me, and not to call when they're around....

~*~ Let Me Know ~*~
What can I say,
Was it all an act?
You said you love me,
But you don’t call.
Thank you…
You just helped me,
Prove my theory.
That you’re just like,
All the other guyz.
You don’t care,
You never did.
So that leaves me,
Wondering why,
You’re even with me.
I know that I love you,
But it’s killing me,
Knowing that you don’t.
Somewhere deep inside,
I believe you love me.
But it just doesn’t seem,
Like you care anymore.
Sometymes you’re great,
Then others I don’t exist.
All I ask is to know,
Absolutely for sure.
If you love me,
Let me know.
If you don’t,
Then let me go.

   ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~    



“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2000-12-03 10:37 AM


Ahhh, you're not stupid. You shouldn't think that. I know what it's like to have a clingy boyfriend, and to want him to spend more time with his buddies, and to possibly give you your well-deserved space. A boyfriend isn't an appendage, you know??
But it appears as if your saying he spend more time with other people has backfired a bit, and now you may regret it. But I believe your feelings are increasing, and I really believe if you tell him how you feel, and that you know it sounds hipocritical, but your missing hearing from him, he will understand. COMMUNICATION is key!
Good luck
xoxo
Jenn


"Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC

Tamma
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2 posted 2000-12-03 12:30 PM


Im working on it Jenn!!   If he ever calls me LoL hey, check out my *new* website:
www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner

Hope  ya like  

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*`
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“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me


[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 12-03-2000).]

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-12-03 04:34 PM


I think this poem is an over-reaction of what is truly going on. Sure he doesn't call a few times but does that mean that he doesn't love you? I think not!
Anyway you're the one who told him not to when friends are around. He's only complying with what you asked. I think you both need to sit down, and calmly discuss these issues with one another. Good luck!



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4 posted 2000-12-04 03:08 PM


I'm going to have to say that I agree with Dopey on this one, make sure you don't jump to too many conclusions before you talk things through with him.  

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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