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Sometimes I Think I Miss You
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Sometimes I Think I Miss You |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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Sometimes I Think I Miss You Sometimes I think I miss you… But I really don’t, you see What I truly miss Is the way you held me Sometimes I think I miss you… I just miss the way you kiss The way you looked into my eyes And the way it was me you missed Sometimes I think I miss you… But I miss the rose to me you gave I miss the closeness I felt The day of that rainy parade Sometimes I think I miss you… But oh you hurt me so You lied to me and slandered me And so I cried and let you go Sometimes I think miss you… But it was really the feeling The feeling of being wanted The feeling of the healing Sometimes I think I miss you… I wore my heart on my sleeve I cared for you so strongly And me you did deceive Sometimes I think I miss you… But it’s best to stay away Though sometimes I don’t want to I know it’s best this way Because sometimes I think I miss you… And I know I really don’t But then I really do… And then I say, “I won’t!” |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Powerful poem! it was so awesome and it had a great message. people shouldn't lie to the ones they love, because if they love them enough, they'll understand  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You must be inside my mind! I've felt like this so much!!!I had a relationship like that. I always thought I didn't need him, or miss him, but then I'd just start crying, or something. I did miss everything he did, and him just in general. But like you also stated, he was deceiving, and manipulative, and we know we deserved better! I hope you will be able to move forward! Good luck, good writing. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was wonderful. I loved the way the repetition just flowed along with the whole poem. It was a great poem! I liked this one very much!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was soooooo good!! I know exactly what your talking about It sucks when you miss all of these things but you know deep down inside that its for the better. Great poem hun!! |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
i know the exact feeling of this..i went through this as well..i liked the poem though..it was really great.. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a really good job of expressing this feelings, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
wow... it's great! i really liked the sense of boldness at the end. stay strong.. n you'll make it through!! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I loved your poems and I truley mean it! Keep up the good work! I could kind of relate to you! I missed those little things from one of my ex girl friends but I really didn't miss her! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I loved your poems and I truley mean it! Keep up the good work! I could kind of relate to you! I missed those little things from one of my ex girl friends but I really didn't miss her!  "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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