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branden726
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0 posted 2000-12-02 08:50 AM


When you leave I will have NOTHING at all,
When you leave ill find out my life wasnt complete,
When you leave ill shed tears of sadness,
When you leave ill be all confused,
Why do you have to leave?

I sit at my computer right now and i think of you,
Think of you leaving me,
Its true you have to its not a choice,
But why god, why?
Do you SCREW ME!?!
Its not fair anymore you knew how much I loved her,
Yeah well guess what BITE ME,
Im going after her,
I want her so bad i cant let go,
She's leaving me january 17 to live with her dad,
Why should he be happy?
He hasnt been the one shes cryed to, talked to and hes not the one who's always been there,
It was me!
I want all kinds of happiness but i guess it'll never come true!


Well guy's this is TRUE! Yes its very True my gf has to move away to go live with her dad. And once again i get left behind with a broken heart that will never end so sorry all you'll see out of me are poems of dark or poems of straight out lonlieness or whatever sorry im a lil shaky still buh bye

[This message has been edited by branden726 (edited 12-02-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-12-02 09:05 AM


*hugs*  I'm so sorry to hear that ur gf is moving away, but u'z can still keep in touch right?!..  so not all's lost..

Thank you for the writing, even if it did have a sad touch to it, it was good, and I liked it!  

Hope all goes well in the future  

~Dianne

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2 posted 2000-12-02 10:09 AM


I feel so bad for you, but why does your relationship have to end? If you still love each other, you could still have a relationship! Look at Passions, we are scattered all over the world, and we talk to each other every day. I know that isn't the same as having the person here, but it's better than giving your relationship a death sentence.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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branden726
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3 posted 2000-12-02 10:11 AM


Well, its more complicated we cant go out because she's moving out of state. sorry i dont think i can do that. thanks for the reply tho.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"


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4 posted 2000-12-02 10:19 PM


Branden, much love man.....much love. Hey i'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo damn sorry! Dude that's the last thing I wanted to hear from you! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dude, i'm so here for you. Got me? I'm so here for you. IF you ever need an ear to rant on about how much you miss her and how much you love her and how hard it is........icq me or something. I'm a click away pal!
I'll be there when you need me, but for now.......dude.......smile. Try.....



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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5 posted 2000-12-03 02:37 PM


Oh my, this isn't cool.  I remember just reading how great things were, and now this!  Not exactly what you needed right now, was it!?!   I hope you make it through ok.  That probably sounds impossible, but you will live through this.  I like Dopey's advice to smile.  I heard that if you smile, even if you're not happy, it makes you feel better.  So just try it

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branden726
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6 posted 2000-12-03 03:36 PM


Thank u guys and thanks for letting me know i have a shoulder to cry on. thanx once again!
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7 posted 2000-12-03 09:20 PM


I think I liked it better when it was all hypothetical, and "what if..." This sucks, and I'm sorry. What is meant to be will be, however, and maybe one day soon it'll be okay.
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

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8 posted 2000-12-04 10:32 PM


Wow, what a great poem.

I'm sorry to hear about your girl, it must hurt so bad.  At least you can realize that pain, not like most guys who just shrug it off and act as if you never mattered to them in the first place.

Well I guess it's that old saying again - LOVE BITES!!

I hope you feel better.

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9 posted 2000-12-05 05:17 PM


Damn man, this sucks. I didn't expect to hear this. I've been away for a few days and this crap happens. Man,I don't know what to say but, if you need something... Well, if you're sure this was meant to be, then something will happen to fix things, it'll justtake some time, some pain filled time. Sorry man!
                                          Jon

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