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DreamerGrl27
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0 posted 2000-12-01 10:38 PM



In This Strange World

In a room with a hundred people
I'd still feel all alone
But there are some things about me
That I have never shown
They way I love you
With all my heart
But no matter what I do
We always end up apart.
I'd give anything I own
Just to have a chance
i'm just asking for a friendship
I don't even want romance.
But I guess some dreams
Will never come true
No matter how hard you try
Or how much I love you.
If there was a way to tell you
Exactly how I feel
I'd tell you that I love you
And I know my love is real.
But I never got my turn
To say what I wanted to say
Maybe in this strange world
Things are meant to be this way.

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1 posted 2000-12-01 11:45 PM


This is a great piece. I can relate to this SOOOO well. I hope that you are able to tell this person the way you feel someday.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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CareBear3
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2 posted 2000-12-02 12:02 PM


I know exactly what you feel! you captured it well, but its funny maybe im wrong  but because things are soo "weird" as you say you know i am almost ok with that.  Being without someone may leave the door open for someone else......you captured that feeling well in this.  Great Job!

"In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable"

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3 posted 2000-12-02 12:34 PM


I guess some dreams arent meant to be true, but its extremely unfortunate. I think if someone loves another than they have every right in the world to be happy with that person their heart captures...but if that happened to everyone, every single time someone fell in love, i guess it would go unappreciated. Once you find that one guy that can treat you exactly how you want to be treated and you can be happy with for the rest of your life, you'll hopefully realize that all this pain this guy is putting you through now, is worth it, because it'll make the right person all the more special...Keep smiling hun  
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4 posted 2000-12-02 02:30 AM



Dreamer-
   wonderful write...
   you've done a great job of getting
   your feelings across in this..
   keep it up..

   *smiles*,
   ~vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Pixie-Babe03
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5 posted 2000-12-02 03:42 PM


aww htis is so good! good luck with this guy! unrequitted love is the hardest thing to deal with   i know from experience btu great display of emotion!
~*pixie*~

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6 posted 2000-12-02 10:29 PM


Pixie babe copying my thing with unrequited love.......hehe.

Anyway i think this poem is sad and i know how you feel. I wish you the best of luck!



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7 posted 2000-12-03 02:50 PM


I also think this tells your feelings well, you did a good job on it

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Slim
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8 posted 2000-12-04 06:57 PM


well.. everyone else has basically said it all!!! this is great!! i luv it.. keep up the good work!!

"just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible"

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