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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-11-30 04:00 PM


You have the nerve
To talk about me
Behind my back
But you always
Forget to mention
Your baby boy
He may not
Be around
But I’m still
His momma
A mistake, yea
But it was
Both of ours
Not just mine
Not just yours
You give every
Tiny detail
But the fact
That I was
Pregnant, by you





“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

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curlygurly
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1 posted 2000-11-30 04:03 PM


Wow, that was really good. Is it true? i hope not for your sake and if it is i hope he sticks around. you really expressed yourself well in this one  
Curly


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-Lenny Kravitz


Tamma
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2 posted 2000-11-30 04:10 PM


acctually, yea its true...but i have another one floating around that should preceed this one called Daniel- My Son



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3 posted 2000-11-30 04:22 PM


I think you're right, he needs to accept some of the responsibility for his actions, he can't just blame you.  Otherwise he is acting very imature.  Nice job of writing this and I'm sorry he treats you like this.

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Tamma
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4 posted 2000-11-30 05:33 PM


Kepping in mind, this is NOT written for Justin(my current) I don't think he'd ever be able to do something like the EX did


~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~



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Erin
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5 posted 2000-11-30 05:52 PM


Tamma~
You went through some hard times...And Im sorry you went through it...And its a shame that this guy cant accept responsibilty for what he did...


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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6 posted 2000-11-30 07:35 PM


This was a great poem of expression. You got your point across beautifgully. I hope all is well in the end.



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