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From the girl inlove with you

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layla
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0 posted 11-30-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for layla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for layla


I'm sure you know what I've felt for you
these past few years
you've been a big part of my life a big cause of my pain, my tears
I know you're not madly inlove with me
but I'd like to know how you feel
you took my heart without warning but it's not for
you to steal
I want to know if you hate me because If you do I don't know why
I was always kind, loyal to you
But if you hate me thats allright
I always felt that you cared for me deep down inside
but I'll never know the truth
as long as there is pride
what I have to say to you right now is gooodbye
maybe our paths will cross in the future
and you will finally see my eyes
you will finally see me and see whats true
That I am a beautiful person
not just a girl inlove with you
© Copyright 2000 layla - All Rights Reserved
IsGona
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1 posted 11-30-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for IsGona   Email IsGona   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsGona

"as long as there is pride"
I think this is a key line.  Don't ever let a person take this from you.  I know the feeling of losing someones love.  but this is his lost.  I hope all works out for ya.
IsGona


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I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
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Lakewalker
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2 posted 11-30-2000 03:25 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

"you will finally see me and see whats true
That I am a beautiful person
not just a girl inlove with you"

I really like how you ended this poem, it's very good

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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3 posted 11-30-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

This is a beautiful way to make your feelings known. If this person can't see that you are a beautiful person, he doesn't deserve you! Thanks for posting!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav


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4 posted 11-30-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Awwwww this is really sad. I hope everything works out in the end. Great poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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5 posted 11-30-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for Child of the Stars   Email Child of the Stars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Child of the Stars

  
   So sad indeed...I'm glad I got to read this. Good luck with life and its..everythings...

  ~Carly

Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid.
Erin
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6 posted 12-01-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

LoveBug said the words so perfect. If this guy cant see you are a beautiful person from deep in your heart then he doesnt deserve to have you. You could find someone that sees you inside and out for your beauty. Thanks for sharing this!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.
DreamerGrl27
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7 posted 12-01-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for DreamerGrl27   Email DreamerGrl27   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreamerGrl27

I feel the same exact way about someone...I've been in love with him for about two years...and he never told me how he felt, but I know he never loved me as much as I loved him...it's really hard to deal with, but you'll eventually get through it.  And I think saying goodbye is the best thing to do...because even though you love someone so much, you still can't wait forever for them.  But hopefully everything will work out in the future. Goodluck.
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8 posted 12-01-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

I can't really claim that I've loved someone... but I have most definitly liked someone and have them not return the feelings. Or, if they do feel something, it's not the same, and then they toy with me... Relationships stink! But I'm sorry this is happening to you, one day you'll realize you deserve better.
xoxo
Jenn


"Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC
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I think that your doing the right thing by saying goodbye to this guy right now...He's a huge importance in your life but you cant wait forever to see if he'll finally tell you exactly how he feels about you. If your meant to know then that will have some odd way of falling into place...but until then, live life and get out there and see what other kind of wonderful people there are in the world.
B@BYG!RL
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10 posted 12-02-2000 08:48 AM       View Profile for B@BYG!RL   Email B@BYG!RL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for B@BYG!RL

I have just let someone go that I loved, but never really felt, or was told, that he loved me the same.  Said my feelings well.  Thanx for sharing  

~Dianne
layla
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11 posted 08-22-2016 09:53 PM       View Profile for layla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for layla

wow
well almost 17 years later, and my highschool crush finally saw me as the beautiful person that I am.  he just confessed his love to me. I cannot believe my wish from ths poem manifested!
Bluesy Socrateaser
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12 posted 11-29-2016 04:28 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Love will find a way layla. This I know to be true...and now, so do you.

I wish you much happiness.


BTS

  

...just bein' Bluesy

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