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From the girl inlove with you
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From the girl inlove with you |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
I'm sure you know what I've felt for you these past few years you've been a big part of my life a big cause of my pain, my tears I know you're not madly inlove with me but I'd like to know how you feel you took my heart without warning but it's not for you to steal I want to know if you hate me because If you do I don't know why I was always kind, loyal to you But if you hate me thats allright I always felt that you cared for me deep down inside but I'll never know the truth as long as there is pride what I have to say to you right now is gooodbye maybe our paths will cross in the future and you will finally see my eyes you will finally see me and see whats true That I am a beautiful person not just a girl inlove with you |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
"as long as there is pride" I think this is a key line. Don't ever let a person take this from you. I know the feeling of losing someones love. but this is his lost. I hope all works out for ya. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"you will finally see me and see whats true That I am a beautiful person not just a girl inlove with you" I really like how you ended this poem, it's very good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful way to make your feelings known. If this person can't see that you are a beautiful person, he doesn't deserve you! Thanks for posting! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwww this is really sad. I hope everything works out in the end. Great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
So sad indeed...I'm glad I got to read this. Good luck with life and its..everythings... ~Carly Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LoveBug said the words so perfect. If this guy cant see you are a beautiful person from deep in your heart then he doesnt deserve to have you. You could find someone that sees you inside and out for your beauty. Thanks for sharing this!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I feel the same exact way about someone...I've been in love with him for about two years...and he never told me how he felt, but I know he never loved me as much as I loved him...it's really hard to deal with, but you'll eventually get through it. And I think saying goodbye is the best thing to do...because even though you love someone so much, you still can't wait forever for them. But hopefully everything will work out in the future. Goodluck. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I can't really claim that I've loved someone... but I have most definitly liked someone and have them not return the feelings. Or, if they do feel something, it's not the same, and then they toy with me... Relationships stink! But I'm sorry this is happening to you, one day you'll realize you deserve better. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I think that your doing the right thing by saying goodbye to this guy right now...He's a huge importance in your life but you cant wait forever to see if he'll finally tell you exactly how he feels about you. If your meant to know then that will have some odd way of falling into place...but until then, live life and get out there and see what other kind of wonderful people there are in the world. |
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B@BYG!RL Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 19Australia |
I have just let someone go that I loved, but never really felt, or was told, that he loved me the same. Said my feelings well. Thanx for sharing ~Dianne |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
wow well almost 17 years later, and my highschool crush finally saw me as the beautiful person that I am. he just confessed his love to me. I cannot believe my wish from ths poem manifested! |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Love will find a way layla. This I know to be true...and now, so do you. I wish you much happiness. BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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