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Can't Say Goodbye
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Can't Say Goodbye |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
I came to tell you it's too late for our relationship to be saved But then you give me the look that started it all You know I can't fight that stare The one that brought me into this mess You stop me dead in my tracks Before I can say goodbye You whisper those wonderful words The sweetest words I have ever heard You whisper them to reasure me That everything is okay You want me to believe That we are a match made in Heaven But you know as well as I do That will never be true I want to say goodbye so bad It brings tears to my eyes You don't know how much you've hurt me How much you made me cry You won't let me speak Because you know my words before I can even speak them You won't listen As I try to say goodbye I don't want anymore pain I can't take it anymore It's driving me insane You've got to let me go As I have done with you Starting over is not an option And it will never be So can't you please just understand that this is how it's got to be Can't you just say goodbye?  When boys are four they will give you thier gum, but when they are forteen they won't even give you the time of day... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I really liked the way this was written. It is way too true...Good luck in all this mess... ~Carly Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great! I know what you are going through, and it will all be ok someday. I will always be here for you. Great job, Keep writing!! Much Love, ~*~Priscilla~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This sounds like a really tough situation, I hope everything ends the way you want it too. You did a really good job of expressing yourself with this poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Sometimes men can be like that, it's hard to tell the truth, because, to some extent you still like them. Or want to be with them. But in the end you've gotta do it, good luck. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I've had this same exact thing happen to me and for me it was such a confusing and depressing time...i hope he will make things easier on you and just say goodbye...but i think you know what you and what will make you happy and i think your doing the best thing...best wishes.. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great poem. You did a great job expressing yourself. I hope everything works out for ya. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I know what you're going through and it completely sucks......yea but this was a great poem. I hope to read more from you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
sorry to hear what you're going thru. If I could be of any help (probably not  ) just ask. I hate to see you all hurt this much I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
This is a great poem it hurts to be in such a mess, but I hope you find the strength to tell him. Its in you just look deep enough and fight through the pain. Keep it up great job...Merry Christmas  |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
you know all i can say is great poem i cant put into words how i feel right now but its really fricken good. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
I dont really know what to say... I think everything I can say is a vast understatement to the real emotions running loose through my head right now. I guess I can tell you I know how you feel.. This poem was beautiful.. more then beautiful, but I cant seem to find the word right now. It is an exquisite piece, thank you for posting! *Jennifer |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. I have been there myself and it sucks. Keep up the good work. Steph |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I think a lot of people feel like this at some stage... and yes, I did too... I wanted to do this about 6 months ago, but I couldn't do it... in the end I was more hurt because I knew I could have prevented it all by saying "Lets end this while we are doing good and have good memories to hold onto..." Now all I have is hatred for him! I hope that everything works out for you!! Great post!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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