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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
The darkness overcomes, Compensating for loneliness, Feelings of sore abandonment, Alas, depression prevails. Sorrowful emotions fulfill, Compelling the victimization, Painful memories arise, Hurtful thoughts of joy. Blackened heart burns, Into the firey forgotten soul, Lost amongst insanity, Exhausted from fighting. Cold blooded fury, Trusted honest comments, Believable touch of care, Glommy new beginnings. Confusing hate-filled actions, Powerless when idiocy awaits, Buried relationships uncovered, Awaken by shaky unsure hands. Holding on to the last shred, Of happiness that once existed, Left alone to fend for nothingness, Alone remembered; I think I loved you. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Deeply sad, powerful words here. I can definitely relate to the feelings here. Well expressed!  *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Like the other poem of yours I read, it reflects a lot about myself. Terrific job and keep writing.. ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey kimmy, Great job on this poem, you expressed yourself very well! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, well this was very powerful. Very sad and sad is bad. So be happy! I know i know, easier said than done. No worries, i'm in my personal hell aswell. We can be hellish together!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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