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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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Buried Thoughts Sometimes I feel as though My heart is frozen within me Cold, lifeless, and empty Is this because I can’t be loved? Or is it I who can’t love? How many chances for love have I unknowingly passed by? I’m beginning to grow weary of love I fear that every warm feeling Will suddenly turn to pain, agony, strife Is it me? Is there something wrong with me? Or do I simply catch the bad fish in the sea? And when will I catch a good one? One day a man will come along And the ice will begin to melt away, my heart revived The emptiness I feel will perish He will hold my heart in his strong, gentle hands Warming it more with each passing moment Protecting it for as long as he walks the earth and there on after. He is my one true love… *This is a very unusual style for me... it was more of an emotional outlet than a creative one *LOL* I was having some straaaaaange thoughts...* [This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I liked it alot. I have been going through the same feelings lately so I can totally relate. Sometimes it just seems to take forever and when it doesn't come you begin to wonder who's fault it really is. Very nice piece Jon |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"The course of true love never did run smooth"-Shakespeare Love isn't easy, and there are time that I dread the idea of it. Love always has a way, though. Someday, it will work out for you. I love the hopeful tone you have at the end of this piece. Great thoughts, my friend. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You really tell your feelings well in this poem, I think you did a good job on it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i thought that your poem was great. Sometimes we just have to deflate all that excess hot air within ourselves. Some people jump on trampoleens......some people eat pie....and some write nice poems. Either way they're all fun things to do! Especially when you do them all at the same time hehe. Ok anyway good joB!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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