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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
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0 posted 2000-11-27 06:45 PM


everyone is gone
they all have left
am i here to wonder
all by myself?

i saw them leave
i couldn't stop them
but do i have to suffer
and be condemned?

there's this feeling
i cannot describe
there is this feeling
deep down inside.

what do i do now
everyone is gone
do i raise myself up
to be strong and carry on

i lived a full life
and have been blessed
now alone i will go on
and leave my own bequest.

(in case you guys don't know, bequest means the same thing as legacy)  

~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~

© Copyright 2000 Valerie - All Rights Reserved
Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
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Maine, USA
1 posted 2000-11-27 06:52 PM


YYAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!! Another good one!  

[This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 11-27-2000).]

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-11-28 03:59 PM


I think this is a very well done poem I really like it!

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Child of the Stars
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3 posted 2000-11-28 04:56 PM



  Hey. This was really great, I liked it a lot.

Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid.

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-11-30 06:46 PM


*Javier has learned a new word today kids.......bequest*

C'mon kids......let's all say it now....
BEEEEEEQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUUESSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTT!!!!

Wonderful poem as usual. Hoping for more.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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