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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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When i held you in my arms i held myself I held so much I held my lif my everything was in you Now your gone now im gone everything is gone My arms are empty my heart is shattered and my soul is hollow What can i do without you? When you left you took me with you But im still here with my arms wide open and empty waiting for you to come back .... The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I think most of us can really relate to what you wrote here...it's hard to suddenly find yourself without the one you love. I'm so glad you posted this one, it was a wonderful piece. Kristin ~*Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... without your smile.~* ~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong, |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you very much this breakup has been very hard for me it happened like 2 months ago but i was with the guy for almost 2 years he was my first love its tuff but things are looking up thats for the reply The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ugghh...Breakups are such devistating things..they make you feel so alone and empty...your overall feel like crap. I know it'll be hard hun but keep your head up and things WILL get better in time...remember, what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger. When i held you in my arms i held myself I held so much I held my lif my everything was in you |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
The worst part of breaking up is expecting the person to come back. And its hard especially when you know that they arent gonna come back. I hope that one day you and him get back together. Why would someone want to throw 2 years away??? People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"My arms are empty my heart is shattered and my soul is hollow" You did a really good job of explaining these feelings, the poem is very good. I'm glad to hear that things are looking up  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem! I hope things get better for you! Keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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