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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-11-26 06:59 PM


An Ex


The greatest guy I ever met
Nicest person I know
Can talk to him about everything
He jokes around a lot
All fun and games
Too bad he's and ex

It was hard to give him up
I miss him more each day
You learn more everyday
Think about the songs that remind you
Of how it was
Cry for days
Just to realize he's an ex

How do you get him back
He's found someone else
The greatest guy you've ever met
Nicest person you know
An ex


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it"


© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
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1 posted 2000-11-26 07:40 PM


Yea it sucks to want somebody u can't have anymore. I know exactly how that feels. ANyhow, great poem and good luck!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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2 posted 2000-11-27 02:59 PM


This poem is very good!  It sounds like you're really missing someone, this seems like a tough situation.  I hope things can work out the way you want them to.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-11-27 03:11 PM


Chel~
Its so good to see you back. The worst thing about still loving your ex is that there must have been a good reason for yous breaking up or yous would still be together. Hope to see you posting more soon.


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-11-27 03:29 PM


Thanx you guys make me realize why I post.  Love can definitely suck sometimes, and coming here makes me realize that it can actually get better.  I have been very busy, and am trying to get back into writing poems more often.  Thanx again.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it"


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