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vix616
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0 posted 2000-11-25 03:57 PM


this time for my DaD...

When i was younger
you would hold me in your arms
all through the day and during the night
keeping me safe from harm

I look back now and think
and all the love i can see
i realise that i'm so lucky
'cause you were chosen for me

There's definetely something special
about a fathers' love
someone must sit and plan it
then send you from above

Our love will last forever
i want to let you know
that you are my special hero
'cause i just told you so..xxx



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Erin
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1 posted 2000-11-25 05:09 PM


Aww this was a sweet poem to your dad. I hope he likes it!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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2 posted 2000-11-25 05:45 PM


awww good poem
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3 posted 2000-11-26 12:21 PM


Wow ........sweet!
I hope my little daughter thinks the same of me!
Anyway you seem to have a great relationship with your family. Good! hehe



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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4 posted 2000-11-26 12:16 PM


I bet your dad would love to get this if he hasn't read it already!  You did a good job on it, it's such a nice poem !

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silvrduck
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5 posted 2000-11-26 12:25 PM


this is a really sweet poem! i'm sure your dad would love to read it, if he hasn't.  

take care,
Sarah

with the unknown comes no expectations
in this i find my peace

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6 posted 2000-11-26 10:25 PM


Aww this is so sweet...i use to have that with my dad but unfortunately now we dont get along at all...so be greatful for the relationship that you have with him and hold on to it tightly.
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