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vix616
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0 posted 2000-11-25 03:43 PM


SISTERS

S isters we will always be
I ndeed we have no choice
S omehow we'll always have the skill
T o hear eachothers voice
E ven if we're far away
R eminders will be there
S illt thing we've gone through
  and just can't help to share..x

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-11-25 04:50 PM


This was really creative. I liked it too!!! Your sister must be really special to you.

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2000-11-25 07:50 PM


This is a very sweet acrosstic style poem.
Good work!
xoxo
Jenn


"Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC

curlygurly
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3 posted 2000-11-25 07:53 PM


awesome poem! it was really catchy. keep it up
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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4 posted 2000-11-25 11:50 PM


This was great. The flow was nice.
Glad to see sisters being so close!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-11-26 11:53 AM


This was really good, i like it

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