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The damage of Words
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The damage of Words |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
The blood pours down, Slowly...yet filling up a once proud heart With the stench of death, And betrayel. I have died, Sacrificed...To those who don't deserve, To know life or its limits, The knowledge it holds inside. Covered in bitterness, Cold...You need only ask, Who caused this bitterness, Who made my life end? Beaming the darkness, Burning...The insecure emotions, Causing a wave of insanity, Yet building up a wall. Life is but a task, Unwelcome...The essence of life, Is nothing but a waste, Excessive use on the cretins of society. The pain is the lies, Damaging...The words you speak, Are shallow and lifeless, How could a friend leave you like this? "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You words are very strong in this poem, it's good!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Thanks for the reply. I wrote it when I was pretty cut. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem a lot. POwerful!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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