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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-11-22 10:09 AM


ok, So the title is a work in progress. I wrote this last night, about Justin and I, from the first time I saw him...up until the moment I began writing this   When I sat down and thought about it, it doesn't really seem like its been as long as it has, I mean, it seems like just yesterday that Andrew was on leave for christmas 2000. And it was only a few weeks later that I remember seeing Justin for the first tyme  

I first saw you almost a year ago,
I saw you almost daily.
But didn’t speak until,
Nearly 6 months ago.
It was only a few moments,
But they left an impact on me.
I didn’t expect to see you,
Nor talk to you again.
I didn’t even know,
What your name was.
Three months ago,
I saw you again.
In the background,
There was a fair going on.
I was in his arms,
But lost in your eyes.
Three days later,
We were back in school.
And finally had the chance,
To talk 1-on-1.
We talked more and more,
As the days and weeks went on.
I talked to you about everything,
From my love life to the content of my heart.
I tried to show you,
How much I cared.
I held your hand,
And looked into your eyes.
If I had the chance,
I would have even kissed you.
Everyday, you sat in front of me,
And had your hand in my seat.
And, everyday, I grabbed it,
Then one day, you put your arm around me.
At that exact moment,
My whole body tingled.
I always asked to see your ring,
Just to slip it on.
One day, I took his off,
And replaced it with yours.
It got to the point that,
He called less and less.
Which made me,
Want you more and more.
I saw it coming,
I didn’t know when, nor how.
When I gave his ring back
I’ll admit, yes, I did cry.
Part in anger, she took him from me,
Part in sadness, it was over.
Then came the happiness,
I could now have you.
When I saw you in the hallways,
I drug you with me.
He broke it off,
I needed to talk to someone.
I cried, and cried some more,
All I needed was a hug.
I just wanted to go home,
To talk things out with  my brother.
While I waited for my ride,
I looked for you.
I just needed to feel you,
Just once before I left.
That night, the phone rang,
I smiled when I heard your voice.
You brought me back up,
When I was so far down.
I dreamt of you that night,
I whispered your name when I woke up.
Somehow, at lunch we started going out,
I still don’t know how, but it happened.
Now 2½ months in things are great,
We’ve vowed forever.
We’ve had our little tiffs,
But we’ve always made it thru.
Step-by-step our relationship,
Blossomed, starting with a tiny glance.
Then, you became my best friend,
But I couldn’t think about that.
All I wanted was a kiss,
Or at least a hug.
I was amazed when,
You slipped your ring on my hand.
I loved you the first moment we spoke,
And grow to love you more everyday.
Thank you for everything you’ve done,
And may do in the future.
I love you, Justin,
And that won’t change.

~*~Tamma Loves Justin ~*~



“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

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Tamma
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1 posted 2000-11-22 07:43 PM


Umm...No comments?
  



“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
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vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-11-22 09:41 PM



Tamma-
   what a wonderful story you've penned.
   I'm so happy that things are working out
   for you...you've done a beautiful job
   of expressing your feelings in this piece.
   thanks for sharing it with us.

   *smiles*,
   -vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-11-22 10:19 PM


You've expressed yourself so well in this piece Tamma, I'm so happy things are going so well for you!  I have to point out this following line ... it just jumped from the page at me ... beautifully penned ...

"I was in his arms,
But lost in your eyes."

Excellent Tamma!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2000-11-22 11:40 PM


Well, hmmm what to say? i have nothing to say but good its kinda a weird poem ya know i am not so sure but its pretty good i like it.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"


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5 posted 2000-11-23 08:30 PM


This poem is a nice piece of history about your relationship.  Someday you'll look back and be glad to have it   I think it's written well and is very clear, nice job!

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6 posted 2000-11-24 08:59 AM


Yea...Justin's great...sometimes I dont really see how I deserve to be with someone so...great. I'm happy that I've found him...He treats me good. When I'm cold, he wraps his jacket around me, with him still in in. I know that we're both young....but I do hope that we both come thru with our vow. Only tyme will tell.

       ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin       
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[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 11-24-2000).]

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7 posted 2000-11-25 02:35 AM


i think this is great!
I liekd it a lot. A wonderful history!



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8 posted 2000-12-13 06:05 PM


glad to see that people in passions are finally getting what they deserve.  And what a wonderful tribute to justin this poem is.  he must really be someone special.  thanks for sharing Tamma

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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9 posted 2000-12-13 08:31 PM


heh...im not so sure anymore...every day he has me in tears....i love him so much and i dont wanna lose him...but it seems as tho i am...


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10 posted 2000-12-14 01:31 AM


Dear Tamma - love is never what it appears to be!  The bond of love is sooo strong that it jumps hurdles you don't even see!  Love lasts longer than a lifetime...  you just have to find it before the lifetime is through!  I am sure things will be just fine for you!  No matter what hold on to the memories and cherish them forever!  It is the good times that last - but the bad that we tend to remember!!  Good Luck, congratulations on a poem well written!!

Melz!!

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11 posted 2000-12-14 02:32 AM


Tamma~
I met my boyfriend about 2 years ago. And about a year ago we started to become really good friends. And it seems like just weeks ago we hooked up. I dont know what to tell you about crying. You shouldnt cry cuz guys arent worth the tears we girls cry but we show them that we use our tears for them. I wish you the best of luck and I hope everything turns out good for you two!!!

P.S.~Sorry it took so long for me to reply. I have been really busy with working and a boyfriend. You should know what I mean with that.



People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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12 posted 2000-12-14 09:09 AM


Thnx both of ya!!! I hope we can make it thru this, yesterday i asked him if he really loved me or if this relationship was just a joke to him...he his exact words were "I dont know" i started crying, and he hugged onto me, and every time i tried to move, he held on closer. i told him that he was the best guy to walk into my life and i didnt want him to walk back out,a nd he said he wasnt planning on it...I Dont Know What 2 Do!!! Can anyone help me?????


~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


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13 posted 2000-12-14 07:03 PM


Tamma~
I know that you love him and all but a guy should say he doesnt know. Cuz if hes playing with your heart you are gonna be the one hurt in the end. Tell him again and see what he says. Cuz a heart isnt a toy. And it shouldnt be broken.


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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14 posted 2000-12-22 09:51 PM



This is realli fantastic ey!
the way you write about Justin is the way i feel about my bf at the moment.
We've been together for 6mths nearly and everyday i grow to love him more. Even though i'm only 15 and he's 17, we know that our love is true and want to get married and be together forever.
Isn't it the best feeling in the world to know you've found the one for you?
Luv Jo
xoxox


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