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Emotional (i need some advice guys)
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Emotional (i need some advice guys) |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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Emotional Left,right,up,down. Are all directions in which this realtionship is going, I dont know what to do i love you so much, But somehow i feel that there is something that you may be hiding, Something your not telling me, Something that might hurt me deep inside, Sometimes i love you more then ever, Sometimes i feel that you mean nothing to me, I feel like you mean nothing to me because it seem like theres something hiding, I dont know what to do My nights, My days, My evenings, Have been nothing but emotional, I have never felt love in this way before, It seems like something that is very unreal, I feel more hurt then i do loved, I feel that theres something that must be done, I am not sure quite what that mite be, Can you help me in making this decision? Help me make the decision to keep going or come to a STOP! ~*Love always and Forever*~ "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Hey bro, I know you usually write this stuff off the top of you head, but this time it sounds real. I have had the EXACT same problem.This poem is really good, as always, but if you need some advice from someone who has been there, drop me an e-mail and let me know what's up! If you don't want to, no big deal, just interested in trying to save someone from the hell I wnet through. See YA Jon |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one showed some real emotion, it was great. I don't really know what advice to give you, but I have to say that if you are feeling this way: "I feel more hurt then i do loved," than you should tell her and try to change things. But what do I know. Anyway, good job expressing yourself  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I wouldn't think of telling you to either end or continue the relationship. This choice is one that should only be made by you and her. If you feel she is hiding something from her you need to talk to her about that. Don't come out and demand to know if she is hiding something from you, but instead tell her how you feel like you did so well in this poem. Maybe there is a good explination. You never know. Good luck Best Regards IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thanks Jon, lakewalker(your always there thanks) and isgona for replyin and giving me a lil advice isgona well i want you to know she was one of the first ones to recieve this poem so she knows how i feel. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You're really going through a lot of emotions in this piece Branden. Great expression, and a lot of questions. I know this answer may sound awfully simple ... but talk, talk, talk. Open up the lines of communication ... and that is where you'll find your real answers. Take care... Best wishes, /Kit |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thanks kit ill try and thanks to everyone else who replyed nitie nite dont let the bed bugs bite no im off to bed but i do appreciate all the replies i go thanks |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
"I feel more hurt then i do loved" I thought that was the most powerful line of the poem...such a sad thing to not know what your getting in return for your love and all of your giving...how much can you give without getting anything back? anyways, I really feel for you and ur situation. It's something that happens too often in relationships. I hope whatever decision you and her end up making is the one that's best for both of you. Good luck and best wishes. ~Kristin ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... wit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Branden i hope all turns out well. I think that it was great of you to give this to her. It's a good sign of great communication which a lot of people seem to lack these days. Anyway i hope all turns out well. Relationships do tend to go all screwed up here and there, but the true test is to see if you can over come all this. Let's see you get an A!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well well well, i guess all i got to say is when i gave this to her it was either a hit or miss. If she accepted it and read it and actually thought about it, it would be a hit, but if she got all offended and didnt wanna talk about well i wouldve been a miss and well i guess we wouldnt still be together. |
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