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Teen Poetry #3

The Power That Guides Me

Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 2000-11-20 07:31 PM

The power that guides me,
is just like me.
I am the power that guides me,
she is me.
The power that guides me,
is what I say and do ,
The power that guides me,
is why I’m always true.
She is the reason I see heaven
when I’m in hell.
When I am hanging my head low
she can always tell.
She is every thing that makes me pure,
and kind hearted.
She is the reason I started.

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-11-20 07:48 PM

Hey. This was really sweet, I liked this line:
She is the reason I see heaven
when I’m in hell.
It's just so great.

Well good job, and I hope to see more of your stuff soon!!!

~Carly

A word is dead
When it is said
Some say,
I say it just
Begins to live
That day.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2000-11-21 04:46 PM

I know exactly how you feel hun....exactly.....Its hard to deal with but at the same time its great...great poem hun

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-11-22 04:10 PM

Dean,
This one was a little confusing but then I read it again and now I think it's great

You did a really good job here, keep posting for us!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

http://www.thehungersite.com

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-11-25 12:58 PM

This was great.
I hope to see more of you around!!!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-11-27 04:46 PM

Dean~
Its good that you have someone to show you the right paths of life...Someone to teach you...Good for you!!!Hope to see more by you!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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