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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
Your words were so mellifluous They flowed like sweet honey Dripping from your lips And sticking to my heart Great things just tumbled out of your mouth Like Marbles hitting the floor And rolling into my mind An endless collage of beautiful phrases An endless supply of the softest kisses When you looked at me- You looked into me Like you were after more than my heart It was my whole being that you wanted... Needed And I gave you everything Showed you everything Made you my everything But you didn't make me your everything Our whole relationship was just a falsification And I found out that that you were everything to everyone I'm not the type of person you cheat on (and get away with it, at least) "Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without." |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, very impressive! The situation sucks, but it seems you showed him aye? This is great really, I hope he learns his lesson   Bel |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Been there, done that...exellent, vivid poetry, I really enjoyed it! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I've been the victim of many "sweet talkers", and you describe the situation well. I'm glad that you saw this person for what they really are. You'll find someone a whole lot better, I'm promise! Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job expressing this, as the others said. good job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the expression in this one was great. I liked it a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
your name fits you well. im very impressed with your piece. and jealous at your talent at the same time. thanks for sharing this I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
ditto to what every one else said. You show great expresion here. Thanks for posting. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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