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kaile
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0 posted 2000-11-20 11:59 AM


Made
baked rice for me
today~
reminds me of
how good
it is
to be
in control

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mopey
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1 posted 2000-11-20 12:02 PM


short but sweet. i love it and it tells so much with so little words. we all love to be in control.

   love ya
    mopey

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2 posted 2000-11-20 04:30 PM


LoL I thought this one was very cute hun...short and sweet!!
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3 posted 2000-11-20 06:23 PM


This was cute...i know how it feels when you do something little like that and it really makes you feel in control and a lot better.
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4 posted 2000-11-21 05:41 PM


I love this, it's so great!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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5 posted 2000-11-24 06:42 PM


Yea......making rice always seem to being about the feeling of shear independence!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


kaile
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6 posted 2000-11-25 01:38 AM


thank you all..i usually hang out in the Corner Pub but i just thought that we teens would appreciate better the much-sought-after feeling of independence and decided to post it here...glad you all agree
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7 posted 2000-12-09 11:22 PM


i love rice --- i think it's the asian side of me. well, the spanish side eats rice too    

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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