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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-11-19 10:28 AM


There’s no way
That I can possibly
Chose a best friend.

Theres Justin,
The love of my life
He was there
For me when I was hurt
Even before we got
Together I talked to
Him about everything

Melissa, my best friend
From last year
We were so close
But drifted apart
She’s so far away
But helped me
The day I nearly gave up

John, the first person
That rushed to my side
When he broke it off
He held me close
And told me he’d
Love me no matter what
He was always there to wipe my tears

Angel, the one I
Don’t ever have
To be serious around
Like all the others
I love her, but in
A different way
I love her for the smiles she forms

And, finally, theres Monica
The one that helped
Us get together
And ya just gotta
Love her moose
She helped me out
The day he broke it off

You see, theres no
Possible way I can
Chose just one
They were all
There for me
Just when I
Needed them.



If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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1 posted 2000-11-19 10:50 AM


Tamma, it sounds like you have some great friends. Why do you feel that you have to choose just one as your best friend? I have about four best friends! If these people love you so much, they won't make you choose just one. You describe your feelings well. Keep up the good work!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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Tamma
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2 posted 2000-11-19 11:02 AM


LoveBug: They aren't trying to make me chose, but it confuses me. I'm not used to having so many close friends. Just a couple of years ago, I was known as a slut, I had no friends, and everybody talked about me, behind my back.  And my junior year, I had more friends then I knew how to deal with, and this year, it seems like I have twice as many as I did last year.


~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~  


If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



vlraynes
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3 posted 2000-11-19 04:53 PM



Tamma-
   How wonderful it is that you
   have so many people who care
   so much about you.  
   As LoveBug said, you shouldn't
   feel as if you have to choose
   only one 'best' friend...any
   'real' friend is a 'best' friend
   and it sounds like you have LOTS
   of best friend.  
   You've done a great job with this.  
   Keep it up!  

   *smiles*,
   -vicky


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"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




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Tamma
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4 posted 2000-11-19 05:37 PM


Thanx Vicky! And Welcome to Teens #3


“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-11-20 03:00 PM


It sounds like you're overwhelmed with friends   That's a good thing!   I hope they all stay true friends with you, then all can stay as your best friends.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Erin
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6 posted 2000-11-21 01:10 AM


Tamma~
Just be happy that you have so many people there for you. So many good friends. Its the worst when you have to choose. But if it were me in that position I would honestly choose my bf, cuz he is the only one that is ever there for me when I need someone. Girl keep up the good work!!!


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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7 posted 2000-11-21 04:54 PM


Tamme your really lucky to have that many people. Im in the same kinda situation...i have my best friends and sometimes im asked to choose and its the most difficult thing the world to do...Great poem
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8 posted 2000-11-25 01:07 AM


Yea you just can't pick who's the best of the best cuz they are all equal in their ways. Great poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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