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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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0 posted 2000-11-17 10:00 PM


My school isn't the same as everybody's.....

We ae in different units,
people have their owns or you share,
nurses are there helping you.

We eat breakfast
get ready a half hour
we eat lunch go hang out
we eat dinner go hang out.

I see people lost in their worlds
they don't know why they are there
some cry, some scream.

School is different
you hear kids screaming
you hear them in pain.

They are lost
I don't know how to help
the little kids look up to us.

I think they need help
~Min~



If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~



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Child of the Stars
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1 posted 2000-11-18 11:38 AM


  
  Wow, Min. This really touched me..They do need help...Dang, the world needs more people just like you...

branden726
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2 posted 2000-11-18 01:57 PM


i agree 100% with child of the stars wow. we do need plenty more ppl like you and well if we cant do stuff correct then how are the younger kids gonna? We are the future and we need to be role modles. thanks now ill look at things different

"put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever"



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3 posted 2000-11-20 03:20 PM


This poem is expressed really well, good job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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4 posted 2000-11-20 04:37 PM


i'm glad i insiperd you. oh branden, and child of the stars i enjoy being your friendthanks for being my frined. i guess 1 poem makes people think differently! Bye minna  

If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~


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5 posted 2000-11-24 06:36 PM


Hey....this kinda confused me.
what kinda school is this?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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6 posted 2000-11-24 07:41 PM


   Hey it's a school for physical challenged people like me. There's the youngest cottage for 7-9 they look up to the oldest people. At Ross it's the oldest and we go and talk to them. At the beging of the year we are assigned to a younger kid and we make them feel welcome to the school.     Minna

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7 posted 2000-12-09 11:07 PM


Minna --- i probably haven't read all your poems, but for some reason, the ones i have read have touched me so much.  You have inspired me with the strength that you have shown in your poems.  I too should look up to you to find strength from within me.  thanks so much for sharing your poems  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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