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luvnkris
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0 posted 2000-11-17 06:37 AM


What I’ve found in you…

From the 1st time we talked
I found kindness in you
When I had my problems
I found advice in you
Whenever feeling down
I found cheer in you
When we got to know one another
I found a friend in you

And soon I found so much more
Soon I discovered you were everything I wanted
Then I discovered you were everything I needed

You were care
You were love
You were concern
You were there for me
You are the one

I’ve found in you everything




* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-11-17 11:35 AM


This poem is really good, it says so clearly how much you two must feel for each other.  Awesome job expressing these feelings!   And I like your signiture

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2 posted 2000-11-19 05:50 PM


Aww this is so sweet...you've found incredible things in this person hun...very cute poem.
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3 posted 2000-11-19 11:34 PM


"I’ve found in you everything"

This is a beautiful poem! You and your boyfriend are a great couple, and I know that you guys will be together for a long time. Keep up the great work!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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4 posted 2000-11-24 05:00 PM


This was great. Your devotion for this person is evident.
Good luck!



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Erin
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5 posted 2000-11-27 04:17 PM


I feel the same way about my boyfriend. Sounds like you found a really good guy for yourself. Keep him!!! And keep up the good work!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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