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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-11-15 04:24 PM


Same Old Thing:


Time slips away.
Two beats on a drum.
I'm walking fast,
But shadow man stays ahead.

I can't keep awake.
Dying of stench,
And rusted bars
While covered in sheets.

The stained life.
My bracelet world.
Can't live it up.
Can't keep going.

Gone and here
While everything disappears.
So I smile and frown
Expecting tomarrow to be the same.





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
curlygurly
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1 posted 2000-11-15 05:00 PM


Great poem dopey! this one was excellent!  
Curly

"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Acies
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2 posted 2000-11-16 06:00 PM


for some reason, i feel like you look at life as some kind of burden.  You should start looking at the brighter side.

do me a favor,  i'd like to see you post a really happy poem..tell me when you do

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-16 09:50 PM


...uh oh, you're going to be passing me in the number of posts here pretty soon Dopey   But good job on this poem, it's very.....uh....symbolic   Seriously though, it's great!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-11-25 04:07 AM


MY outlook on life was negative because negative things were happening to me. So yea.... hehe.......and lake, no worries right?



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


vix616
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5 posted 2000-11-25 09:13 AM


Great poem dopey, i've just joined and been reading your poems and replies.  Good to hear that you reply to all the poems-at least there's one nice person in the world..
keep writing and replying
hope to hear from you soon
lodsa luv Vicki.x

branden726
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6 posted 2000-11-25 12:48 PM


Well...lets just say great poem like always. It seems mysterious in some ways i dont know maybe thats how i look at it ne ways its good and i like it
                ~branden~

Erin
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7 posted 2000-11-25 04:46 PM


Dopey I know I have gone through life looking for the worse instead of the better. Just try to look forward to what is ahead of you.

P.S.~Soon your gonna be passing me with your posts.


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Kandi
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8 posted 2000-11-25 11:58 PM


As always, great job here Dopey...sorry to say I can relate...ah well life goes on right?   RIGHT! Hehe awesome post
~Kris~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~Won't you come and hold my hand?
This world has taken me as far as it can...
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Lakewalker
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9 posted 2000-11-26 12:15 PM


Wow, you're way past me now, but that's great    I have way to much caffeine going through me right now.  Anyway, when are you going to post some new ones?< !signature-->

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope
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10 posted 2000-11-26 01:00 AM


Glad you all liked this one.... Anyway vix that's sweet of you......Kandi thanks...
Erin, hopefully!!!!! hahaha.....im really devoting myself to passions.......like....BIG TIME!
And lake....brotha you know i'll be posting some new ones right about.....NOW!
hehe....yea i was in jersey.....so i couldnt post them there and i couldnt post yesterday cuz i had to play catch up (sorry)...so 2 new ones up tonight....hope you enjoy them.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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