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Knowing you is beautiful
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Knowing you is beautiful |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
"Knowing you is beautiful" When you are despised by the world, I'll comfort you and hold your hand When life seems to pass you bye, I'll sit by your side and whisper in your ear "Knowing you is beautiful" When you are hurt by those you love, I'll put my arms around you and wipe away your tears When life doesn't seem worth living, I'll pause put aside my pain, and make you laugh When you turn your back towards me, I'll be there for you when you everyone turns there back on you When your cold with fear and everything is ugly, I'll wrap my self around you and say, "Knowing you is beautiful" When you need to see above the crowd, I'll give you my view and take yours gladly When you need a place to live, I'll give you my home and greet the streets with a smile When you cry because you lose someone close, I'll still be there and I'll comfort you When you are are in Deaths path, I'll push you out of the way and take his strike When I'm dying in your arms and you ask me why, I'll simply smile and say to you, because "Knowing you is beautiful" Hope you like it!!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What an incredibly beautiful testimony of a dear friendship ... very deep and lovely thoughts, nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
Kit McCallum Thank you very much!!! i hope to see your's up there pretty soon thank you!! "Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind." - William Shakespeare |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Aww this was great. Hope you showed this to whoever you wrote it for Keep up the great work~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This poem is great! You have described all those feelings that are normally "beyonf what words can express." You are a great writer. Keep writing! niceguy "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
*bumping* EVERYone needs to read this one.."A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I thought it was a well written piece!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a beautiful poem! When you have someone in your life that you love more than anything, you would do anything for them. You describe it well. Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
Thank you to everyone for posting and saying some wonderful things!! I wonder if i do give this to someone just because, they want to. Okay I like this guy and all but he has a girlfriend! But were very good friends, and he doesn't see his girlfriend(only two times or less then a month) what do you think? What if he wrote this for me what does it say? or does it say anything??? anyway thank you everyone |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was a such a wonderful poem. So are you saying you want to give this to him or he already gave it to you or what? I didn't really get that. But this poem is really well done, it's great. I'm going to add it to my library "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Reading this poem was beautiful!!!I love it...Thank you very much for sharing it with us...You must be a good friend to whoever this was written for...Keep up the amazing work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
hi! i really loved this one! it's one of the best i've ever read!! realllllly great! Luv Jo xoxox ps. can't wait 2 see more!! * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now this is a masterpiece!!! What a wonderful tribute for someone. they must feel really special now I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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