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tq_99
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0 posted 2000-11-14 12:57 PM



Feelings

I wait for the day
that you may feel the same way
Although it may never come
a single effort is better than none
I wisht that day would come quick
so that a type of friendship we shall pick
I'm tired of being confused
and I wish that I could say I have nothing to lose
But your friendship with me
means more than you may never be able to see
So as I continue to wait
please consider the weight
the decision may take
for both of our sake


    - tq_99


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1 posted 2000-11-14 03:11 PM



  Hi! Welcome to the wonderful place we call Passions. I really liked this first post. You described your feelings very well. Great job!! And good luck.

   ~Carly

A word is dead
When it is said
Some say,
I say it just
Begins to live
That day.

silvrduck
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2 posted 2000-11-14 03:38 PM


Hey Tq, welcome to passions! Excellent first post!! Very expressive... and I totally understand! Hope everything turns out for the best  
Take care,
Sarah

with the unknown comes no expectations
in this i find my peace

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-14 03:56 PM


Welcome to Passions
This post was a wonderful entrance, it's very good.  I look forward to reading more of your poems and seeing some replies


"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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4 posted 2000-11-14 03:59 PM


Welcome to Passions! I'm glad that you decided to join our big family of friends!  

This is a very good first post. It's always difficult to have a friend that you are starting to feel more for. You describe the feelings well. Keep up the great work!

PS-Check your e-mail!  

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



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5 posted 2000-11-14 04:11 PM


Welcome to passions!!! Excellent first post...i can really relate to this one! Its also great that you said "a single effort is better than none" because that is sooo true!! So many people are so scared and never want to risk getting hurt so never do anything about their feelings...your gutsy hun and you take the right approach to all of this...Great job!
tq_99
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6 posted 2000-11-14 04:35 PM



I just wanted to say thank you to all of you for your nice warm welcoming and encouraging words, I'm looking forward to reading all of your work also. Bye.


"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

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7 posted 2000-11-14 06:11 PM


Welcome to Passions!
A great read and i lok forward to more!



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