a shallow heart...my sweat darling

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Teen Poetry #3

a shallow heart...my sweat darling

brendon2k
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since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
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0 posted 2000-11-14 12:15 PM

a once found happiness
bright stars and joy
i found in your eyes

a new found hatred grows
bleeding hearts and cold air
can you see it in my eyes?

another heart left broken
another dream left unfulfilled
one night spent thinking
one night, a hate grows strong

love?
left with broken hearts
bleeding wrists
are now exposed

hate?
a knife placed in your heart
tears of hope that cried
now bleed red

another night
another night alone
i swear another word
and i'll end
this all

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2000-11-14 08:33 AM

whoa. This really moved me. What are you going through??? Maybe I can relate! Sorry if I'm going on the wrong track, but I'm trying! Much Love,
Allysa

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2000-11-14 04:04 PM

Wow...these are very deep, strong and powerful words...that i think **good or bad** i can relate to...please e-mail me if you need someone to talk to at Acabalena36@AOl.com because im always here for you to talk to...i think i know what your going through...it cant hurt just to listen..feel better hun....

Lani_DarkOne
Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 152
UK

3 posted 2000-11-14 04:56 PM

Deep..and very 'in your face' ..which I like in poetry..
Sad to say..it's a monotonous, never-ending cycle..

"..don't get sentimental
It always..ends up drivel" - Let Down, Radiohead

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-11-14 05:52 PM

A wonderful poem. I like this poem a lot. Especially the title.......it intrigued me.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-11-14 06:25 PM

Wow, you did a great job with this, the poem is really good!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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