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niceguy
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since 2000-11-13

Posts 113
Sapello, NM, USA

0 posted 2000-11-13 05:58 PM

I wrote this on the day that I asked out my G/F. I was waiting for her call to let me know that her Dad approved of it...anotherwards I was pacing around the house with the phone in my hand. So I decided to do something more constructive instead of burn a path in the carpet between my room and where the caller ID was. Hehe. Here goes.

Truth

Today the truth has been told...the step taken.
Our feelings have been let out...shown.
We no longer hide behind this vail...it has been lifted. Now that they know...what will become of us?
Will we hold together...or fall apart?
Today the truth has been told...and now I wait for the news.

"Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts."

niceguy
Member

since 2000-11-13

Posts 113
Sapello, NM, USA

1 posted 2000-11-13 05:59 PM

I posted twice...I'm SO sorry!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-11-13 06:21 PM

Good job buddy!
You seem to write in this way that just reeks truth. I love it.......you're out there buddy and it's good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

niceguy
Member

since 2000-11-13

Posts 113
Sapello, NM, USA

3 posted 2000-11-13 06:27 PM

Thanx dopey. Glad that you like it. It's good to know that someone understands what i'm writing.
niceguy

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-11-13 06:31 PM

I think your poetry expresses feelings very well. This one shows that relief of telling but the nervousness of not knowing (through your questioning). Good work

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2000-11-13 10:09 PM

Wow...that must have been a tedious amount of time that you had to wait for the news...You express your feelings fabulously!! Great job hun!

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