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niceguy
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Sapello, NM, USA

0 posted 2000-11-13 05:58 PM


I wrote this on the day that I asked out my G/F. I was waiting for her call to let me know that her Dad approved of it...anotherwards I was pacing around the house with the phone in my hand. So I decided to do something more constructive instead of burn a path in the carpet between my room and where the caller ID was. Hehe. Here goes.

Truth

Today the truth has been told...the step taken.
Our feelings have been let out...shown.
We no longer hide behind this vail...it has been lifted. Now that they know...what will become of us?
Will we hold together...or fall apart?
Today the truth has been told...and now I wait for the news.


© Copyright 2000 John - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-11-13 06:22 PM


Same thing i said on the other one.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


DancinQueen
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2 posted 2000-11-13 11:06 PM


speechless  

¤*DQ*¤

"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else"

DreamerGrl27
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3 posted 2000-11-13 11:22 PM


I liked how you talked about waiting for the news if you're going to stay together or fall apart...i hope the news was good and everythign works out for you.

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