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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~
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since 2000-11-04
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0 posted 2000-11-13 05:15 PM


If I told you all my secrets,
will you keep them?

If I told you what's in my heart,
will you tell anyone?

If I told you I would die if you left me,
will you leave me?

If I told you I couldn't of made it without you,
will you laugh at me?

If I told you we were friends from the first time we saw each other,
will you deny it?

I trust you with all that I can,
I trust you with all my heart,
Will you return the feeling?
Will you Love me for me?

I will always care for you,
I will always love you,
I will always be there for you.

Will you return the feeling?

© Copyright 2000 ~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-11-13 05:23 PM


I like this one!!!If you gave this to a certain person I dont think that they would refuse it...So give it to someone special to you...And see how they react...Good work too!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-11-13 05:51 PM


This one tells you thoughts well, I hope you find the answer to your question soon.  And I hope it's the answer that you want   Good job on the poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Dopey Dope
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Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2000-11-13 06:26 PM


This was great. These questions are common for people who really care about somebody along with the insecurity of not knowing whether the feeling is returned. Hopefully it is and good luck!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
4 posted 2000-11-13 09:00 PM


Great poem, I really loved it. Well, I agree with Dopey, this is something that always happen to me, I mean I feel like so close to this person, but then questions and doubts overwhelms me and I seem to lose my mind. But you just have to believe in the other person, I mean I think that if this friend is so close to you, then he/she must feel the same way. So I hope you give this poem to people you love, I mean I agree with Erin, this poem really touches people so, try it. Bye, and good luck
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

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