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Maybe I'll Forget
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Maybe I'll Forget |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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¤Maybe I'll Forget¤ Maybe I'll forget, everything you made me feel. Maybe I'll move on, and find a new love thats real. Maybe I'll forget, the way you made everything right. Maybe I'll realize I lost you, and my heart will give-up the fight. Maybe I'll forget, all the times you made me smile. Maybe I'll stop crying, but I think I'm in denial. Maybe I'll forget, the way you completed me. Maybe my love for you will fade, I'm just so tired of not being happy. I know one thing's true, I will be myself again one day, And you know another thing? I'm lying. "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
DQ~ Trying to forget is really hard...Especially if you loved that person...It takes time and your hurting will eventually heal...I am here for you if you ever wanna talk...Ok??? Good poem too!!!Keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
That poem was awesome...and really moving. I felt like that when I broke up with my G/F about 4 months ago. I will never forget all the times that we spent together and how she made me feel special...your not alone in this though alright? Your make it through...it will just take time. You'll find someone else in time...I know that probably sounds impossible right now but...just hang in there you'll see. Keep on writing too cause your good! niceguy |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Geez, flash back. it felt like you were telling my story perfectly. guys are so hard to forget, especially if they tell you they love you, even though u doubt it sometimes. This was so good, i loved it. great poem  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey Sweets, what happened? Don't tell me this is happening right now, I hope not. I hope this is just one of those poems you decided to write without it really pertaining to your life. I really really hope not. Dammit, everyone I know is going thru something bad right now  I hope you'd talk to me about what's going on. Okay? I will always be hear to listen when you're ready to talk. Don't forget that. Do me a favor sweets.....SMILE  xoxo always D <------ewwwww i hate that name < !signature-->I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR [This message has been edited by acire (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This really tells your feelings well, good job on the poem You don't have to forget the good times, just remember there are much better ones to come!!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I love the poem due to the twist at the end. I do this too at times. This was a great poem but keep that head up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I am in tears. I promised myself I wouldn't cry any more today. I am going through something that you so perfectly described. Oh, and if you figure out how to forget, Please tell me. ...beth |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
this is a really good poem. it's what i've been trying to do for a long time...forget. this poem expresses your feelings well. good job! Tia My theory is that I might die at any moment, the tragety is that I don't... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
These things are things that i would never forget...I loved it....Grea job hun |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
cool ideas in this poem, its alwas nice to remember the good times jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow!! I'm soo totally shocked, I posted this like earlier tonite and i left and come back to 8 replies! thats awesome..now let me thank you all: ERIN~ hey chickie! oh NO NO NO im not going thro this right now, but thanks for offering your support niceguy~ geez im glad this touches so close to home with you! curlygurly~ hi! thanks so much for replying, and im glad you could relate, well actually its a tough subj, but we've all been/go through itacire~ hey babe! oh NO NO NO This started out as actually pertaining to my life, then i jsut got carried away. im sorry I didnt mean to get you worried, i guess i should have attatched a note or sumthing, im sorry! I'll talk to you later hopefully tho, bye babe**Lakewalker~ Hey, i always look forward to your replies cause i see you as like an elder lol sounds gay, cause ure probably not even that much older then me! Dopey_Dope~ hey there, sorry botu the other nite! IM me again sometime. i like the twist at the end too  LadyLost~ hi! thanks so much for replying. i didnt mean to make you cry! im so sorry Tia~ forgetting is hard, but we all move on sometime or another Keep your chin up!"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Geez! I was writing thank you's to everyone that replied and two more people reply. That is so awesome. I love posting here, you guys are all so supportive! thanks so much! Shugarhigh~> Hey! I LOVE your work, i just thought i'd throw that in. and thanks for replying. OH and i visited your website, i think it was yours..and i LOVE, and i mean LOVE all those quotes! they are awesome THanks again!"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Ahh i forgot jeremy! im sorry hun! Thanks so much for replying, i havent talked to you in forever! Hope everything' well, bye babe** ¤Kiley¤ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey sweets --- nice to see your explanation, you got me a little worried there and yeah, you're never on anymore I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
acire~ well arent we all smiles today? lol all i keep getting from you is frowns. im sorry i havent been on when you're on. ive been sick and when i come home if i have time i just take nap, then go to dance class. so im sorry ive been busy! but i have your email address somewhere, so i'll find it and write you, happy? talk to you soon"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Me, an elder, no, say it aint so! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
LOL ok..the puzzle's solved "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
*bumping* JESS! come read this quick before people get mad that i keep bumping "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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