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Not Missing You |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I think i should miss you, I really thought i would. I didnt know i'd feel this way, I really wish i could. No more longing for you, Cravings day and night. No more needing you, At the moment thats out of sight. I know it all will come back, And hit me in the face. But right now this feeling of independence, Is something i never wanna replace. I love having you with me, But I love being with my girls. Unfortunate from me, I cant have the best of both worlds. So with you gone, I had the chance. To lay back, And revisit my past. Dont think that now, My feelings for you have changed. But i think my priorities, Have finally been rearranged. |
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ZAOfreak Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 22CA, USA |
What a really cool, down-to-earth poem! I love it. It's good and bad at the same time, emotional-wise. This is something that I can relate to... sometimes you expect to miss someone... they have been so close to you and so great... but when they leave, you realize that they really weren't everything in the world, but just a small nibble off the steep mountain I like to call, life. It's healthy, I think, to step back and take a hard look at what you have, where your focus is, and make a wise decision on what you see. Good work! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderfully powerful poem Shugar! There is nothing so valuable as independence, the knowledge that we can have confidence in ourselves, and the warm and cozy feelings of renewing old friendships. I loved hearing this from you! Keep it up Shugar, and if you ever need a boost down the road, just remember to pull out this poem again! Great writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Wow Shugar! This is really great. It really sort of describes almost exactly how I feel. Keep up the good work!!  I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think a big challenge in a relationship is being able to balance out time with your friends and your significant other. At first I found this feat quite hard, but I got used to it and mastered the balancing effect with flying colors. Hardly any complaints! In my opinion....if you can't balance out time then somebody is either asking for too much or you're just rotten at that. I also think that if you left this guy for your girlfriend then the feeling you felt for him wasn't TRUE LOVE. Maybe some form of love, but not the kind people get married for and so on. Anyway great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Its funny Dopey..because this poem isnt even about a BF...its a about my best friend who happens to be a guy..So your right in saying some of the things you said about love...but balancing time is my biggest problem..my guess is i just suck at it..even though its really difficult for me to have the opportunity to balance things out with him....Thanks for all of your replies! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
hey, I really like this one, it's good. Thanks for sharing it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Great poem! Sometimes this happens...sometimes you don't miss that "person" as much as you thought you would. I know that feeling. But it doesn't make you a bad person k? It's good to be able to focis on other things in your life sometimes...like your friends and family instead of always focusing on him/her. Your a good writer. Keep on. niceguy |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was such an awesome poem. kinda the independent woman thing kickin in. i really liked it. i'm glad you don't need him anymore, that's awesome. Great poem Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was really good...i really understood the whole thing, especially since I'm one of your girls...and I love being one your girls...I'm happy about you changing your priorities, but remember that we're your friends and we understand you and your decisions. And no matter how your priorites are arranged, we'll always be there for you. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww thanks tracy!! I really love having you as one of my gurls too...You guys have all been so great about everything i'm going through with him so i think you for being so understanding. Love ya! |
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jocelyhn New Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 7 |
Wow! This is a really good poem!!!! Keep writing, and I will be lookin for your name!!! ~~Jocelyhn |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
This was a great poem girl!!!! Perfectly put together. I'm sorry that what happened occured, but I am going through the same thing and you aint alone in this. If you need to talk about it or anythin email me at tq_99@hotmail.com k? I'd be happy to help. I have just about the same situation goin on. Except the places are different, my best friend is a girl. Anyway, great work. Keep it up! "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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