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curlygurly
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0 posted 2000-11-12 11:20 AM


This poem isn't pased on real life. It just came to me one day so i figured i'd write it down  

Our song is playing
You take my hand
You hold me close
The music takes over me
We glide across the floor
You look into my eyes
We are now floating
I melt into your arms
We are dancing



"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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Isabel Galaxia
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1 posted 2000-11-12 11:26 AM


Dang, I want that to happen to me.  Gee I wonder if I'll ever have a song....it's been how long?  Oh well.  Maybe it'll happen one day...lol...good job
Bel

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2 posted 2000-11-12 03:42 PM



  So sweet, so sweet.. sigh..well great job.  

  ~Carly

A word is dead
When it is said
Some say,
I say it just
Begins to live
That day.

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3 posted 2000-11-12 05:33 PM


This was a sweet poem.
Some day it might come to pass!



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4 posted 2000-11-12 05:35 PM


ALL I GOT TO SAY IS SHORT AND SWEET. VERY SWEET HUN KEEP IT UP OKAY?


"put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever"



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5 posted 2000-11-12 06:55 PM


This is so great, I think the simpleness adds to it, nicely done

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6 posted 2000-11-12 11:52 PM


Wow...short and sweet is definately a great way to describe this one. God that was sooooo romantic..even tho its not based on a real life experienced i'd just dream of having that happen  to me! Wow!
curlygurly
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7 posted 2000-11-13 04:09 PM


Thanks for replying! I hope this comes true one day too. I'm glad you guys liked it  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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8 posted 2000-11-13 04:15 PM


Awww this was so sweet...I hope one day this happens to me!!!Good one!!!

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niceguy
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9 posted 2000-11-13 04:18 PM


Sweet poem. You can really right girl. I think that everyone longs for this to happen to them...and it will someday. Keep on writing.
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10 posted 2000-11-13 05:40 PM


this is really a very moving piece. very sweet

i think im gonna need that KLEENEX to wipe my eyes   he he he

thanks for sharing curly. keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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