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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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0 posted 2000-11-12 10:31 AM


How can I face the day without you by myside
you said Minna you can do anything once you do it
I rolled my eyes because I knew I couldn't do anything
everyone in the hospital room looked at me
I wanted out.

Later on that day I went fo a walk around
thought what you've taught me
you've always been there for me
you've never given up in life
I said I have to be strong for him
when I came back I had chocolate on my lap
you said you went for some chocolate I see
I said yes you smiled at me.

When we were going home that night
I thought of what you've done
I thought of what we've done in our lives
I thought how we'd go out and laugh, talk
I wasn't ever going to see you again
I was hurting like a shot.

I was so confuesed
lost,
worried,
sad,
I got advise from someone
walk for your dad.

But the next day you were taken by GOD
never saw you again
I thought you came home
you never did...........

Your watching from above
and happy..but we miss you down here
********************************************
RIP
Mikko t Talviharju
2-21-43 to 12-23-99


If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~



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curlygurly
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1 posted 2000-11-12 11:31 AM


THIS WAS SO SAD. i am so sorry that you lost someone in your life. it's always a tragedy when someone close leaves you for heaven, hang in there  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-11-12 04:49 PM


The poems you write about your father and to him are always so great.  I'm sorry he had to leave, but I'm glad you realize he is watching over you now

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3 posted 2000-11-12 05:01 PM


Hon, I'm so sorry that this had to happen to you. It's so hard to lose a loved one, but you can go on remembering the love that they gave you. This is a beautiful tribute. Keep up the great work!

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



branden726
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4 posted 2000-11-12 05:13 PM


Touching, very very touching ya know im really hard to hear this but its a wonderful poem and from what ive learned the worst things in life make the best poems thanks for sharing it

"put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever"



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5 posted 2000-11-12 05:16 PM


This was really sad.
sorry..



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-11-12 05:27 PM


This is so sadly sweet. I know how you feel. My father died the day before my 13th birthday and each year is difficult. I think God takes special people as Angels when he needs them most. Your dad is watching over you, as mine is over me. If you ever want to talk, please email me or find me on ICQ. I'm always here for you.
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