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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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0 posted 2000-11-12 10:08 AM


Walking isn't easy for me
it probably is for you because you can walk
but for me it isn't.

I'm not as lucky
I sit in a wheelchair
with all these stupid strapps holding me
I wanna scream.

Then I look at one good thing I've done
is to learn how to walk
I can only walk 100ft
but atleast I can do it.

Before I leave highschool I'm going to walk
all on my own no wheelchair needed
I don't care how hard it is
I know I can do it too.

I'm going to show my mom that I can do it
I am not giving up only one more year
then I'll be on my own
so I'm going to walk more than 100ft!  
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Info on me- I have a disability called unkown I'm a jr in high school. I love sports and going to collage after highschool as a writer. I don't give up that'd be stupid, my biggest goal in life right now is to walk more than 100ft! For more info go onto my webpage..~*~PrettyGirly~*~  



If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~



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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-11-12 10:56 AM


What a wonderfully inspirational verse PrettyGirly!  Powerful convictions, and sentiments you've written here ... I'm rootin' for ya! Keep up the positive attitude, way to go!    

Best wishes,
/Kit



[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 11-12-2000).]

curlygurly
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2 posted 2000-11-12 11:08 AM


It's so good to hear that you are going to achieve your goal. your inspiration is enough to give courage to a lot of people. i hope you succeed because you seem determined to do this.  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


curlygurly
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3 posted 2000-11-12 11:08 AM


It's so good to hear that you are going to achieve your goal. your inspiration is enough to give courage to a lot of people. i hope you succeed because you seem determined to do this.  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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4 posted 2000-11-12 01:54 PM


That is a wonderful goal to acheieve minna!! And i know that you can do it to!! Great poem and good luck!!
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5 posted 2000-11-12 05:31 PM


That is a wonderful goal and i seriously do hope that you achieve it!

GOOD LUCK!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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6 posted 2000-11-12 06:34 PM


Your words are very encouraging, thank you for sharing them with us   I know you can do this, stay strong and don't give up on your goal!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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7 posted 2000-12-15 06:31 PM


I know you can do it.  Based on all your other poems that i've read, i know you are a very strong person.  Who cares if i can walk, I envy your outlook in life.  Thanks for the share

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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