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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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0 posted 2000-11-12 12:23 PM


Drugs
People seem to do them
to make them feel happy
to take all their worries away.
But they are hurting themselvs
When they drink they are killing themselvs
I look what I could of done to my friend
there's nothing all is what I could of done.
He passed away on Nov 7,2000
Ryan is happy now no more worries or troubles
he'll be missed.

~*~Minna~*~

RIP Ryan  


If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~



© Copyright 2000 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-11-12 01:26 AM


So sorry to hear about your friend. I know how it feels. Great poem and we all need to be aware on what drugs do......this poem clearly states the worst case scenario.
Thank you for sharring!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


ZAOfreak
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since 2000-11-08
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2 posted 2000-11-12 01:41 AM


Just like Dopey said, I'm sorry to hear that. Drugs totally suck. Hang in there. It's hard to lose a friend... (I've lost 2 myself) It is a somewhat comforting feeling though, to know that he is happy. Be sure to dwell on the good aspects, even if you have to dig for them.
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-11-12 10:49 AM


I'm very sorry for the loss of your friend Minna.  Your poem clearly indicates the huge consequences that can happen to those who become involved in drugs, it's very tragic. Again ... very sorry for your loss ...

Take care,
/Kit

curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
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4 posted 2000-11-12 11:12 AM


I am so sorry that drugs got the best of your friend. i hope that you are handling this ok. if you ever need to talk i'm here. hopefully when people read this they will realize that doing drugs can have this effect on you and quit.  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Tamma
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5 posted 2000-11-12 04:25 PM


this is a sad poem...but what caught my eye is your quote...tell me...is there something we dont know about you?

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



Lakewalker
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6 posted 2000-11-12 06:17 PM


I'm sorry to hear that your friend died.  You did write a very good poem about this, and he is in a better place now.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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7 posted 2000-11-13 04:42 PM


Minna~
I am sorry to hear about your friend...But just as you said he is in a better place...And hes watching down on you...


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Acies
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8 posted 2000-11-14 05:05 PM


Minna, I too am very sorry for your loss.  it's good that you post this for everybody else to learn from.  Thanks for this special share

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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since 2000-11-04
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9 posted 2000-11-17 06:12 PM


My qoute is about being disabled and siting..But not wishing to be undisabled.. I have a unknown disability, it's not fair. Sometimes I think of being my sisters but then I think..I'm glad to be me!  


If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~



Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
10 posted 2000-11-17 07:18 PM


I'm so sorry about your friend, but I'm glad you write a poem like this and warn about the consequences of drugs. I hope everything will be fine and take care. If you need to talk just contact me, ok.
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

ThyWizard
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since 2000-08-06
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Chambersburg, PA, USA
11 posted 2000-11-18 09:48 PM


I'm sorry about what happened to your friend, drugs truly tear lives apart.  If you ever wanna talk you can email me.  I liked our piece, it was very straightforward and had a good message.

keep smilin

" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown


Tryps


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