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ZAOfreak
Junior Member

since 2000-11-08

Posts 22
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-11-11 06:51 PM

The other day I was flipping through my journal and found this poem that I wrote last year. It's nice because it applies somewhat to the situation I'm dealing with right now. Enjoy.

You know what?
I am mad,
Unbelievably sad.
I am what you could call,
Emotionally unbalanced
I'm tired of it all.
These people, my family,
My friends I see,
Their soul purpose in life,
Is to annihilate me.
I know it's not true,
But this pain inside,
My joys are few.
Why is this happening?
What did I do?
To deserve this misery
Pulling me through,
These doors of hate,
Down the stairs of pride.
Could this be fate,
What I feel inside?
I tell myself, It will all workout.
I tell myself, I will soon find out,
What in my sake, all of this means.
But I grow impatient,
And fall to my knees.
Help me realize.
Let me see this situation,
Through Heaven's eyes.
That the outcome of this,
Will certainly be worth it.
I know I won't miss,
These things that lead to it.
I'm sorry I've doubted You,
I haven't been true.
You've shown me what to do,
But it's nothing new.

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

1 posted 2000-11-11 07:00 PM

I think everyone can relate to this poem...i know I sure can. This was really good and worded cool. I sure enjoyed it!

~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-11-11 07:10 PM

Well nikki was right because i did relate to it and enjoy it. Great job in yer expression!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

3 posted 2000-11-11 08:40 PM

Awesome poem, you sure are good at expressing urself. hope ur still not feeling that horribly, but if you are i hope you're ok, i'm always here to talk to

Curly

"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

4 posted 2000-11-11 08:59 PM

I agree, this is a poem a lot of people could relate to... I sure can!
I love the way you wrote it, it was just wonderful.

Hope everything's alright!
~Sarah

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2000-11-12 12:51 PM

I absolutely loved this poem!! It was incredible. I think a lot of people feel this way..i know i do. Great job and i love the way it was written.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-11-12 01:35 PM

I love the flow of this poem, the whole thing is really good. Nice work, I love how well you expressed yourself!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

7 posted 2000-11-13 05:04 PM

We all feel like this at times...And hopefully one day this will pass by...Good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

jocelyhn
New Member

since 2000-11-14

Posts 7

8 posted 2000-11-14 06:13 PM

Hey, good poem.
Thats EXACTLY how I am feeling now. You explained it perfectly. We all do feel like thsi sometimes, and we feel like its the end. Well, Good poem, and I hope to see mroe from you!!!
~Jocelyhn

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