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be aware at what you see |
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star 15 Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26 |
hope u all like it. it is exactly how i feel sometiems.. its hard to find out who u reallly are when u are a teeen BE AWARE AT WHAT YOU SEE PLEASE BE AWARE AT WHAT YOU SEE FOR THE PEROSON YOU WILL SEE IS NOT ME SHE IS NOT THE CHILD WHOM SHE USED TO BE THE ONE OF LONG AGO WHO USED TO KNOW RIGHT FROM WRONG WHO USED TO RESPECT THE ONES WHO BROUGHT HER KNOWLEDGE SHE IS NOT THE ONE YOU SEE THE GIRL YOU SEE IS A GIRL OF DIFFRENT STATUE. SHE NOW INTO MANY DIFFRENT THINGS SOME THING THAT MAY BE EVEN WRONG YOU SEE THIS GIRL WANTED TO CHANGE BUT SHE FOUND OUT HER CHANGE WOULD MAKE HER WRONG EVERY TIME SHE TRIED TO DO RIGHT SHE ENDED UP DOING WRONG LOOK HARD AT WHAT U SEE IS THIS THE GIRL YOU WANT TO BE? IS THIS THE GRIL YOU WANT TO CALL ME? SO PLEASE AS I SAY BE AWARE AT WHAT YOU SEE BECAUSE THE ONE THAT U SEE MAY NOT BE WHO U THOUGHT IT WOULD BE. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Life can be confusing and not what you expected, good job on the poem  (Just a small note-it was hard to read this in all caps, but if that's your thing, hey, I can't stop ya ) "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I understand, sometimes that's the way life is. I think the capitol letters are hard to read through, but it sorta adds to the emotion of it. So it's your choice. Kudos!Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a great read, but like Jenn said....the caps makes it hard to read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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