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sweetstuff101
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0 posted 2000-11-09 09:12 PM


This poem was written for my best friend Stephanie (aka sweetypie5). Well hope ya'll like it   


My Angel

A beloved friend
And angel you are
To help me out
You've come quite far
My angel
A blessing sent from above
You guard & protect me
With your love
Friends like you
Are very rare
To lose you now
I just couldn't bear
Against the odds
We pulled through
I don't know what
I would have done without you
We'll face the world
Side by side
With friends like you
Who needs to hide?
No need to pout
No need to cry
I promise not to betray you
I promise not to lie
A true blue friend
I've finally found
I'm finally standing
On sturdy ground






~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~

© Copyright 2000 Priscilla - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-11-09 09:37 PM


This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. You two are lucky to have each other. Friendship is a great treasure, and I hope that yours will last. Keep up the great work!

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



sweetstuff101
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2 posted 2000-11-10 06:04 PM


thanx for the reply lovebug!!

~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-11 11:09 AM


This is such a nice poem, I'm glad you have someone there for you

"I'm finally standing
On sturdy ground"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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4 posted 2000-11-11 03:54 PM


What a wonderful tribute to your best friend, your angel.
It was a great read and im sure she'll appreciate it!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


curlygurly
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5 posted 2000-11-11 09:24 PM


That is so sweet. i know she'll love it. how sweet was that! cute smiley!  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Erin
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6 posted 2000-11-11 10:44 PM


Im glad to hear that you got a friend like this...And its so nice of you to write a poem for her...Keep up the good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

sweetypie5
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7 posted 2000-11-12 01:09 AM


Hey i love ur poem...thank you so much...I feel so special!!!! You are special to and no matter what i will always be by ur side!!! lylas,Stephanie aka sweetypie5



When boys are four they will give you thier gum, but when they are forteen they won't even give you the time of day...


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8 posted 2000-11-13 04:41 PM


it's nie to see you both are really getting along.  That was a nice tribute to you friend.  thanks for sharing.  keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Acies
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9 posted 2000-11-13 04:41 PM


it's nice to see you both are really getting along.  That was a nice tribute to you friend.  thanks for sharing.  keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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