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jytree
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0 posted 2000-11-08 11:01 AM



Here I go,
One last time,
My final my last ryhm,

Leaving again,
Gone with the wind,
So sad it is like loseing a kin,
But really I am just saying goodbye to my friends,

Maybe we will meet in are dreams,
Don't worry things are as bad as they seem,
Because I go now to become a man,
I know it is right it is what I need so I demand it,

All my friends that I love,
Will be blessed by God above,
For now you will barley hear my voice,
But fear not for it was my choice,

Please don't cry shed no tears,
Soon I will be able to calm you fears,
For it is my chance to be someone,
It's my chance to be number one,

So smile and wave,
As I turn and slowly walk away,
Because it is my turn to get out of this can,
Finally my chance to be a man,

Goodbye my friends


Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born



© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
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1 posted 2000-11-08 11:04 AM


This is probually going to be one of the last time I will post so I hoped to you enjoyed my work.
But to say why I'm leaving is I'm going into the national guard in two weeks so I will miss you all thank you for listing to my heart so I leave like a came in as the phamtom poet!

Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born



Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-11-08 01:37 PM


You will be missed. Hope you have fun in the national Guard. GOod luck with your life jytree......adios!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-08 02:14 PM


Well, good luck in all that you do! Thank you for sharing your poems with us, you will be missed   Goodbye

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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LoveBug
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4 posted 2000-11-08 03:34 PM


I'm really sorry to see you go. You will be missed, but we all understand that you are entering a new phase in your life, one I'm sure you'll excel in. I just hope that you'll come here as much as you can. Thank you for writing this beautiful farewell.

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-11-09 06:18 AM


You will be missed jytree, but we do wish you the best of luck in all your future endeavours! Take care ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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