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to walk away |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
everything in me wanted to stay but something told me to walk away i don't know why i listened it was the biggest mistake of my life but maybe it was worth it you have changed so much lately for the better and sometimes i wonder if you still would have if i hadn't chose to walk away but i will always regret losing you and wish i could still be with you but you are so happy now and it's not fair for me to keep bringing this up it's just that i am so overwhelmed with my lack of you that i can't breathe and the days w/o you start to lose their value and i just have lost the will to get over you b/c i know it will never happen and i want to die b/c i know it's my fault and everything in me wants to break away from all the things (people) in my life all the forces that fuel my mind, and just be with YOU!! but i know this is pointless thinking and something tells me i'm too late maybe i shouldn't have written this but i miss you and i love you and i am sick of always running away from my fears. so even though it's going to kill me either way should i even hold on to these thoughts or should i chose to walk away? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I loved this poem. A great way of expression. Keep it up and keep posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Don't run from your feelings. I hope you find the answers to the questions at the end of your poem soon, and i hope things work out how you want them to. Well done poem, I like it. "maybe i shouldn't have written this but i miss you and i love you and i am sick of always running away from my fears." < !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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